Help With Poems?

IS this a good simile poem it was so funny/ it was like a clown was there /he laughed like when he was a child /he laughed like when there was a clown he felt so good /when there was something like a clown around. Then a metaphor poem clouds drift and float around the sky /It seems like a soft white fluffy cloud/You stare at it as it hoovers over you/Just withing until it pes and last poem for personification isThe gr shivered as snow fell to the ground/ The snow danced to the ground as the wind howled/ And the trees danced in fear of the wind/ During that dark and lonely night